Bug 7764: (follow-up) editorial tweaks

Besides some grammar and capitalization corrections, this patch
adds a link to the wiki page for installation Koha on Ubuntu
from packages.

Signed-off-by: Galen Charlton <gmc@esilibrary.com>

diff --git a/INSTALL.ubuntu b/INSTALL.ubuntu
index 93190d0..60f5ed4 100644 (file)
--- a/INSTALL.ubuntu
+++ b/INSTALL.ubuntu
@@ -32,6 +32,9 @@ packages. Installing from packages is not the same as installing
 from source. These are not your recommended instructions for
 production servers.
 
 from source. These are not your recommended instructions for
 production servers.
 

+For instructions on how to install Koha on Ubuntu from packages, please
+consult http://wiki.koha-community.org/wiki/Koha_on_ubuntu_-_packages
+

 To help assist with the development and improvement of Koha,
 continue with these instructions and read more about version
 control using git! See USEFUL REFERENCE LINKS below.
 To help assist with the development and improvement of Koha,
 continue with these instructions and read more about version
 control using git! See USEFUL REFERENCE LINKS below.


@@ -45,7 +48,7 @@ when installing from source.
 NOTATION
 =================================================================
 
 NOTATION
 =================================================================
 

-Commands are indented by 4 spaces, and should be relately obvious
+Commands are indented by 4 spaces, and should be relatively obvious

 as commands. Commands may have blank lines between them to
 indicate that you should not just copy and paste the entire block
 of commands.
 as commands. Commands may have blank lines between them to
 indicate that you should not just copy and paste the entire block
 of commands.


@@ -77,8 +80,8 @@ scope of this document. Consult your system administrator,
 network administrator, or IT Department for assistance as needed.
 
 These instructions assume you created a user account with your
 network administrator, or IT Department for assistance as needed.
 
 These instructions assume you created a user account with your

-login in credentials and not one called koha. This is to prevent
-the system user koha from having more permissions than it should.
+login credentials and not one called 'koha'. This is to prevent
+the system user 'koha' from having more permissions than it should.

 
 
 ADD A KOHA COMMUNITY REPOSITORY
 
 
 ADD A KOHA COMMUNITY REPOSITORY


@@ -141,14 +144,14 @@ Downloading Source Via Tarball
     tar xvf koha-latest.tar.gz
     ls
 
     tar xvf koha-latest.tar.gz
     ls
 

-NOTE: You need to cd into the koha directory, but since the
+NOTE: You need to cd into the Koha directory, but since the

 version changes, you'll know by the ls command what it is.
 
 IF YOU ARE DOING A DEV INSTALLATION:
 Downloading Source Via Git
 =================================================================
 
 version changes, you'll know by the ls command what it is.
 
 IF YOU ARE DOING A DEV INSTALLATION:
 Downloading Source Via Git
 =================================================================
 

-Please see the following wiki page, following the instructions up
+Please see the following wiki page and follow the instructions up

 to and including "git checkout -b mywork origin".
 http://wiki.koha-community.org/wiki/Version_Control_Using_Git
 
 to and including "git checkout -b mywork origin".
 http://wiki.koha-community.org/wiki/Version_Control_Using_Git
 


@@ -188,7 +191,7 @@ https://help.ubuntu.com/community/MysqlPasswordReset
 
     CREATE DATABASE kohadata;
 
 
     CREATE DATABASE kohadata;
 

-The koha database has now been created with the name kohadata.
+The Koha database has now been created with the name kohadata.

 
 Create User and Grant Permissions
 =================================================================
 
 Create User and Grant Permissions
 =================================================================


@@ -201,8 +204,8 @@ CHOICE FOR THE {PASSWORD}'S IN THE FOLLOWING COMMANDS:
     FLUSH PRIVILEGES;
     QUIT
 
     FLUSH PRIVILEGES;
     QUIT
 

-The koha administrative user has now been created with the name
-koha and the password of your choosing.
+The Koha administrative user has now been created with the name
+'koha' and the password of your choosing.

 
 
 CONFIGURE KOHA
 
 
 CONFIGURE KOHA


@@ -212,11 +215,11 @@ User/Group Environment Variables
 =================================================================
 
 IF YOU ARE DOING A STANDARD INSTALLATION, then create a
 =================================================================
 
 IF YOU ARE DOING A STANDARD INSTALLATION, then create a

-separate koha system user:
+separate 'koha' system user:

     sudo adduser koha
 
 There is no need to set the following environment variables,
     sudo adduser koha
 
 There is no need to set the following environment variables,

-because koha is the default account to use.
+because 'koha' is the default account to use.

 
 IF YOU ARE DOING A DEV INSTALLATION, then create some
 environment variables for the process to pick up and use later:
 
 IF YOU ARE DOING A DEV INSTALLATION, then create some
 environment variables for the process to pick up and use later:


@@ -307,7 +310,7 @@ PRE-WEB INSTALL SETUP
 Ubuntu MySQL Security Tweak
 =================================================================
 
 Ubuntu MySQL Security Tweak
 =================================================================
 

-There is a security risk in Ubuntu's MySQL default set up. Type
+There is a security risk in Ubuntu's MySQL default setup. Type

 the following commands:
     mysql -u root -p
 
 the following commands:
     mysql -u root -p
 


@@ -421,8 +424,8 @@ the following command:
 Enable Modules and Site
 =================================================================
 
 Enable Modules and Site
 =================================================================
 

-Now enable the apache modules this config needs, enable koha's
-configuration, and restart apache.
+Now enable the Apache modules this config needs, enable Koha's
+virtual host configuration, and restart Apache.

     sudo a2enmod rewrite
     sudo a2enmod deflate
     sudo a2ensite koha
     sudo a2enmod rewrite
     sudo a2enmod deflate
     sudo a2ensite koha


@@ -432,7 +435,7 @@ configuration, and restart apache.
 SETUP ZEBRA
 =================================================================
 
 SETUP ZEBRA
 =================================================================
 

-The zebra process send responses to search requests sent by Koha
+The Zebra process send responses to search requests sent by Koha

 or Z39.50/SRU/SRW clients.
 
 The user you run Zebra as will be the only user with write
 or Z39.50/SRU/SRW clients.
 
 The user you run Zebra as will be the only user with write


@@ -508,7 +511,7 @@ fields). Arrows also work.
     lynx http://127.0.1.1:8080/
 
 
     lynx http://127.0.1.1:8080/
 
 

-SETUP YOUR LIBRARY IN KOHA
+SET UP YOUR LIBRARY IN KOHA

 =================================================================
 
 After the web install, you should be redirected to:
 =================================================================
 
 After the web install, you should be redirected to:


@@ -521,7 +524,7 @@ Follow these steps:
   under the Basic Parameters heading.
 - Click New Library and enter your information into the form.
 - Click Submit.
   under the Basic Parameters heading.
 - Click New Library and enter your information into the form.
 - Click Submit.

-Your Library is now setup in Koha.
+Your library is now set up in Koha.

 
 Take the time to read the documentation to do other necessary
 setup tasks such as creating a patron, and importing or entering
 
 Take the time to read the documentation to do other necessary
 setup tasks such as creating a patron, and importing or entering