Bug 7936 followup: Copyedited Offline Circ help files

Signed-off-by: Jared Camins-Esakov <jcamins@cpbibliography.com>
Signed-off-by: Paul Poulain <paul.poulain@biblibre.com>

diff --git a/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/prog/en/modules/help/offline_circ/process_koc.tt b/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/prog/en/modules/help/offline_circ/process_koc.tt
index 1389cd0..ca81ae8 100644 (file)
--- a/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/prog/en/modules/help/offline_circ/process_koc.tt
+++ b/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/prog/en/modules/help/offline_circ/process_koc.tt
@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@
 
 <h1>Offline Circulation File (.koc) Uploader</h1>
 
-<p>The offline circulation tool for Windows will generate a KOC file that you can upload into Koha once your system comes back up.</p>
+<p>The offline circulation tool for Windows generates a KOC file which you can upload into Koha once your system comes back up.</p>
 
-<p>Browse your computer for the *.koc file</p>
+<p>Browse your computer for the *.koc file.</p>
 
-<p>Once the file is uploaded, click the process the file</p>
+<p>Once the file is uploaded, click the 'Process Offline Circulation' button.</p>
 
-<p>When this is complete you'll see the summary of actions from when you were offline (including any errors).</p>
+<p>When this process  is complete, you will see a summary of actions from when you were offline (including any errors).</p>
 
 <p><strong>See the full documentation for the Offline Circulation File Uploader in the <a href="http://manual.koha-community.org/3.8/en/offlinecirc.html">manual</a> (online).</strong></p>
 
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